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the moon-crows flight;
migrate towards the
soul-pariahs,
dig craters in their
hearts and watch them
burn slowly, brightly
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the blueby marlboroblacks

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse©2014 marlboroblacks
ataraxy for the lonely.
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Sssorry Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014
Awesomeness. I love it. Kind of wanted to see it stop on watch, simply because the word choice is so terrific in the rest of the poem that it makes those three stand out as bland, but that may be intentional, dunno. Lovely poem though!
White light,
Sorry
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marlboroblacks Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
it was definitely meant to have a more simplistic vibe than what i usually write. 
thank you! i actually really like this poem too haha
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